M.G. Ridgeview
Dreamer
This is more of a brainstorming topic, but hopefully the worldbuilding forum is close enough. It's been some time since I've written fantasy, and want to start a serious novel attempt. A lot of the time, I don't have a problem coming up with interesting (hopefully) ideas, but I'm struggling for some reason. Maybe because its been so long since I've written.
I have a spark of inspiration for a story, but I just can't seem to flesh it out, and am looking for help. The novel would take place in a unique pseudo-medieval world (I don't want to follow the western European Middle Age theme too closely for originality's sake). All I have so far is a battle hardened warrior, highly trained and educated, who goes to fight a war for several years. When he returns to his home country, he is shocked to discover everything has changed, and the credit he expects to receive for his actions overseas is lost.
He would have to make sense out of the new world and his place in it. He could have a dilemma as to whether or not he should change the culture or accept it. He also has to accept that his social status and accomplishments have been diminished by the new society, and that much of what he accomplished may have been futile in the end. It would be maybe an introspective/philosophical novel, but also with opportunities for action, being that I want to write a thoughtful action/adventure fantasy.
Don't know if you've read the works, but the closest approximation to what I'm thinking would be like a cross between Homer's Odyssey and the sci-fi novel The Forever War by Joe Haldeman. I want to explore themes like culture shock, diminished expectations, deferred dreams, questioning society, etc. Maybe that's deep for an action/adventure story, I don't know :confused2:
I know there may already be something missing here, which would be a direct opposition to the protagonist, but I have an idea for that. Maybe some powerful lord or politician behind the changes to the character's country, that the main character might choose to rebel against.
If anyone wants to help me round out what I've written so far, I'd really appreciate it. Also, any ideas you'd donate for an original world. I'm trying to think in terms of a new kind of environment, not forest, desert, arctic, etc., but something more exotic, like the ocean floor, but without the ocean. Sea plants for vegetation, coral reefs for mountains, etc.
I have a spark of inspiration for a story, but I just can't seem to flesh it out, and am looking for help. The novel would take place in a unique pseudo-medieval world (I don't want to follow the western European Middle Age theme too closely for originality's sake). All I have so far is a battle hardened warrior, highly trained and educated, who goes to fight a war for several years. When he returns to his home country, he is shocked to discover everything has changed, and the credit he expects to receive for his actions overseas is lost.
He would have to make sense out of the new world and his place in it. He could have a dilemma as to whether or not he should change the culture or accept it. He also has to accept that his social status and accomplishments have been diminished by the new society, and that much of what he accomplished may have been futile in the end. It would be maybe an introspective/philosophical novel, but also with opportunities for action, being that I want to write a thoughtful action/adventure fantasy.
Don't know if you've read the works, but the closest approximation to what I'm thinking would be like a cross between Homer's Odyssey and the sci-fi novel The Forever War by Joe Haldeman. I want to explore themes like culture shock, diminished expectations, deferred dreams, questioning society, etc. Maybe that's deep for an action/adventure story, I don't know :confused2:
I know there may already be something missing here, which would be a direct opposition to the protagonist, but I have an idea for that. Maybe some powerful lord or politician behind the changes to the character's country, that the main character might choose to rebel against.
If anyone wants to help me round out what I've written so far, I'd really appreciate it. Also, any ideas you'd donate for an original world. I'm trying to think in terms of a new kind of environment, not forest, desert, arctic, etc., but something more exotic, like the ocean floor, but without the ocean. Sea plants for vegetation, coral reefs for mountains, etc.
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