Ireth
Myth Weaver
TVTropes defines Fridge Logic roughly as the questions that only occur to a person when, after contentedly sitting through a movie and going to the fridge for a drink, some element of the plot that didn't jive quite right comes back to nag at one's memory. As the thread name suggests, I had this same issue with a plot point in one of my own WIPs.
The plot: Loegaire, a Fae, is on the run from the Winter Court after breaking a condemned princess out of prison and killing an armed guard in the process. Separated from the princess he helped set free, Loegaire seeks shelter in the home of Vincent Hawk, who keeps him safe (albeit reluctantly) until some members of the Winter Court track Loegaire down to arrest him. Loegaire is caught, and Vincent and Ariel are arrested for harboring a fugitive. Vincent's brother Dom, who is visiting Vincent at a very inopportune time and knows nothing of Loegaire's presence, is taken under arrest as well. The three humans and Loegaire are tried by the Kings of Faerie; Vincent, Ariel and Loegaire are found guilty of their respective crimes, while Dom is innocent. As punishment, Vincent and Ariel are ordered to find the fugitive princess so that she may serve her own punishment.
The problem: My initial idea for the story was to have Vincent, Ariel and Dom all sent out in search of the princess, while Loegaire acts as their guide. The story would focus on the antagonism between Vincent and Loegaire slowly turning into friendship as they learn to trust each other, on top of the moral conflicts of having to bring the princess, their friend, to her doom.
The Fridge Logic: Why would Loegaire, who is biased both toward the Hawk family (by means of his paternal affection for Ariel) and Meabh (by means of being her lover), be trusted with such a mission? At least one of the kings knows about the bias, and would certainly let the other know if it mattered that much. And surely the kings would count on the fact that he would try to sabotage the mission, whether by dallying about until the deadline or trying to keep the princess away from them somehow -- which, as the plot originally intended, is exactly what he does.
A solution?: I came up with the following idea -- have Vincent and Ariel sent on the quest with another, non-biased Fae as their guide, while Loegaire is kept in custody for his crime, and Dom is held in custody as leverage to ensure the Hawks do their job right. The problem with this is that the character development I had wanted between Vincent and Loegaire is made impossible. Having Loegaire break out of custody and try to find the princess himself, and finding the Hawks again and joining their quest, would be very out of character since he is known to learn from his past mistakes, and his last attempt at breaking someone out of prison (in this case the princess) did not go as planned.
What should I do here? "Murder my darling" by scrapping some of my original ideas and try to work out a new story with the plot options that make the most sense for the characters, or try to find another way to achieve my original goal?
The plot: Loegaire, a Fae, is on the run from the Winter Court after breaking a condemned princess out of prison and killing an armed guard in the process. Separated from the princess he helped set free, Loegaire seeks shelter in the home of Vincent Hawk, who keeps him safe (albeit reluctantly) until some members of the Winter Court track Loegaire down to arrest him. Loegaire is caught, and Vincent and Ariel are arrested for harboring a fugitive. Vincent's brother Dom, who is visiting Vincent at a very inopportune time and knows nothing of Loegaire's presence, is taken under arrest as well. The three humans and Loegaire are tried by the Kings of Faerie; Vincent, Ariel and Loegaire are found guilty of their respective crimes, while Dom is innocent. As punishment, Vincent and Ariel are ordered to find the fugitive princess so that she may serve her own punishment.
The problem: My initial idea for the story was to have Vincent, Ariel and Dom all sent out in search of the princess, while Loegaire acts as their guide. The story would focus on the antagonism between Vincent and Loegaire slowly turning into friendship as they learn to trust each other, on top of the moral conflicts of having to bring the princess, their friend, to her doom.
The Fridge Logic: Why would Loegaire, who is biased both toward the Hawk family (by means of his paternal affection for Ariel) and Meabh (by means of being her lover), be trusted with such a mission? At least one of the kings knows about the bias, and would certainly let the other know if it mattered that much. And surely the kings would count on the fact that he would try to sabotage the mission, whether by dallying about until the deadline or trying to keep the princess away from them somehow -- which, as the plot originally intended, is exactly what he does.
A solution?: I came up with the following idea -- have Vincent and Ariel sent on the quest with another, non-biased Fae as their guide, while Loegaire is kept in custody for his crime, and Dom is held in custody as leverage to ensure the Hawks do their job right. The problem with this is that the character development I had wanted between Vincent and Loegaire is made impossible. Having Loegaire break out of custody and try to find the princess himself, and finding the Hawks again and joining their quest, would be very out of character since he is known to learn from his past mistakes, and his last attempt at breaking someone out of prison (in this case the princess) did not go as planned.
What should I do here? "Murder my darling" by scrapping some of my original ideas and try to work out a new story with the plot options that make the most sense for the characters, or try to find another way to achieve my original goal?