A fantasy/adventure novel series written for young adult audience (particularly middle school on up). Originally wrote it as something a friend's...
Hello, my nickname is Trip, and I have previously engaged in other writing forums such as critique circle; however, I wish to join this...
Planning to post my chapters here as I finish for you guys to read and critique. Would really appreciate all your comments![ATTACH]
“I think it is best to take a closer look, Lord Rant. I of course am young, and Benjaffe not much older. I am still a student, but I think it is...
“I understand you have read the message.” Rant’s voice was somewhere between excited and anxious. “The people of the Esson are curious to know...
It was quite organized as was apparent when Hasser tilted it forward so that Lord of the House Rant could view its interior. He noticed that the...
The entire behavior was so odd that Bairn, the Master at Arms, put the guards on high alert. He only took them off when the House Mistress...
Hasser was a small man barely standing five foot six but he wore a flamboyant attire, here loose and there clinging, that overcame his physique....
Today, Oct. 6, is the official release day for Monsters, Maces and Magic: Pawn Monsters, Maces and Magic has been my most successful series to...
Calda's house was in sight, and the three youths crouched to stay low. Naelen had a stern feeling in his gut as he creeped toward the house. "We...
When Kallus woke up, he saw a pair of shiny blue eyes staring at him. For a moment he thought they were Lanara's eyes, but these were more gentle,...
Naelen walked alongside his father. The ground was slushy beneath them as they traveled along the footpath. They were both carrying sacks of...
21 December It was a bright morning when Damien came downstairs. Glancing around, he saw the oak bannisters lined with garland. Lanara had placed...
The Tales from Lorianthil series chronicles the stories and adventures of four meaty characters: Amilié, Ashlyn, Damien, and Naelen. Amilié is a...
Kalishan was soon shouting at Thornstaff who replied through clenched teeth until it seemed as if they had reached an impasse. Thornstaff would...
Glancing back towards Thornstaff and Kalishan, Ryjah noticed that they were done arguing and probably waiting for her. "I have to go. Thank you...
Thornstaff let her down to the ground then turned into a panther. He always shape shifted into a cat, he loved the creatures. Ryjah waited as the...
Ryjah grinned as she tossed another pebble at her mentors back. Thornstaff was a grumpy Wood Elf Druid with a six and a half feet tall and dark...
Hi, I joined this group to talk about writing Fantasy-Adventure, and talk about the great things that can be created through the written word, in...
The beginnings of a novel I'm working on, hoping to garner some insight and critiques. A young woman from an obscure village is plunged into a...
