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  1. BJ Swabb

    Chapter One: Haul Wind

    The last few days aboard the Mary Jane have been drawn out, and the passengers, mostly the minotaur and the satyrs, are starting to get restless from being stuck on a ship for so long. Although Ming the black footed ferret has been enjoying it quite well as he loves to pick on the two races...
  2. BJ Swabb

    Granderhill Volume Two: The Unexpected Journey

    Four Islands Two Great Adventures After visiting the first of the Four Isles on the Sea of Legends, Damien, Evelyn and their fellowship heads for Tormal Isle the second island in order to fulfill a deal they made with the leprechaun named Charles. During the expedition, Damien learns some...
  3. BJ Swabb

    Granderhill Volume One

    A Treaty Broken A Demon Released And A Prophecy that Needs To Commence After a great interruption from the Dark Trio things for the land of Granderhill turned from a peaceful land to a land of hiding and fear. With the great King of Torman missing, and no real heir to take the throne, the...
  4. J

    Please give me advice on my action adventure supernatural horror novel

    What do you think of my action adventure supernatural horror story novel? This story will be about a supernatural medieval German prince who is a great warrior as a knight. As a knight, he was one of the best martial artists and individual warriors for his time. He is an expert in a form of...
  5. Oculus

    The Walls of Westguard

    Chapter 1 The Wall Raskelf was a dozen miles away along the winding curves of the valley but half that distance the way that Harad had walked, taking the straight route over the hills with his long, gangling limbs carrying him swiftly on the narrow paths. The high ridgeline ended in a treeless...
  6. ThatOneParanormalWriter

    Recommendations for Children's/Young Adult Adventure Fantasy?

    Hello there. So I have been interested in adventure fantasy lately and was wondering if anyone had any recommendations. I want a fantasy adventure novel (series or not) that is either in the children's fantasy/middle grade market or in the YA market. Everything from classics to more modern are...
  7. Adventures of the Last Aygiff

    Adventures of the Last Aygiff

    A fantasy/adventure novel series written for young adult audience (particularly middle school on up). Originally wrote it as something a friend's daughter would like to read, but also wish it to be something my nephews can read when they become pre-teen/teenagers. The story follows a teenager...
  8. Trip Williams

    Aspiring author of a youth fantasy/adventure series

    Hello, my nickname is Trip, and I have previously engaged in other writing forums such as critique circle; however, I wish to join this prestigious community to get your expert opinions on my fantasy book series I have been working on. I have one book written so far, and relatively well...
  9. Cyrom series

    Cyrom series

    Planning to post my chapters here as I finish for you guys to read and critique. Would really appreciate all your comments!
  10. An old writing I recently edited for garble... maybe it will turn into something

    A Colorful Situation pt5

    “I think it is best to take a closer look, Lord Rant. I of course am young, and Benjaffe not much older. I am still a student, but I think it is fortunate for you that Dulah came with us. How old is your settlement here? 40 years?” Rant nodded. “Well, Dulah is 96 years old. If I am not mistaken...
  11. An old writing I recently edited for garble... maybe it will turn into something

    A Colorful Situation pt4

    “I understand you have read the message.” Rant’s voice was somewhere between excited and anxious. “The people of the Esson are curious to know what the Ouvari think of its contents. How can you help us?” To this Hasser sat back in his cushioned chair. He was all attention before, and he even...
  12. An old writing I recently edited for garble... maybe it will turn into something

    A Colorful Situation pt 3

    It was quite organized as was apparent when Hasser tilted it forward so that Lord of the House Rant could view its interior. He noticed that the materials came in different forms. In the widest of the compartments was another small vial. Another exemplary piece of tiny workmanship. The liquid...
  13. An old writing I recently edited for garble... maybe it will turn into something

    A Colorful Situation pt 2

    The entire behavior was so odd that Bairn, the Master at Arms, put the guards on high alert. He only took them off when the House Mistress complained of all the boots ruffling up her good carpets. It still took Rant’s order to return the soldiers to their business and duties though. Bairn did...
  14. An old writing I recently edited for garble... maybe it will turn into something

    A Colorful Situation

    Hasser was a small man barely standing five foot six but he wore a flamboyant attire, here loose and there clinging, that overcame his physique. Around his torso was a baggy, teal, silk shirt cut away from the right shoulder to reveal a velvet, crimson and gold tunic underneath. It was tucked...
  15. TWErvin2

    Monsters, Maces and Magic: Pawn

    Today, Oct. 6, is the official release day for Monsters, Maces and Magic: Pawn Monsters, Maces and Magic has been my most successful series to date. You can start with Pawn (it's written as an entry book to the series) or go back to the first novel, Outpost. It can be obtained via various...
  16. Chapter Seventeen- Metal and Magic

    Chapter Seventeen- Metal and Magic

    Calda's house was in sight, and the three youths crouched to stay low. Naelen had a stern feeling in his gut as he creeped toward the house. "We should stay quiet," he warned. "Last time I made too much noise." Lila acknowledged him with a nod. "Where to, little brother?" He gestured to the...
  17. Chapter Sixteen- Blood and Snow Pt. 2

    Chapter Sixteen- Blood and Snow Pt. 2

    When Kallus woke up, he saw a pair of shiny blue eyes staring at him. For a moment he thought they were Lanara's eyes, but these were more gentle, carrying a hint of sorrow. "Calda?" Kallus touched his aching head, wincing at the sting. In Calda's hand was a glass vial. Her graceful arm reached...
  18. Chapter Sixteen- Blood and Snow Pt. 1

    Chapter Sixteen- Blood and Snow Pt. 1

    Naelen walked alongside his father. The ground was slushy beneath them as they traveled along the footpath. They were both carrying sacks of provisions with them, foods and goods alike. They were a kilometer away from home and hearth, and they both longed for the warmth of indoors. But Kallus...
  19. Chapter Fifteen- The Winter Feast

    Chapter Fifteen- The Winter Feast

    21 December It was a bright morning when Damien came downstairs. Glancing around, he saw the oak bannisters lined with garland. Lanara had placed strings of garland on every doorway, every entrance. "What is going on?" Damien asked. "Are we having guests?" Lanara was standing on a stool...
  20. Tales from Lorianthil

    Tales from Lorianthil

    Tales from Lorianthil chronicles the lives and adventures of four youths belonging to various races and cultures. There's Damien, the orphan who gets adopted by Lor elves, Ashlyn, the mage who possesses empathic and prophetic powers, Naelen, the witty, sassy swordsman, and his sister, Lila, who...
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