Tales from Lorianthil chronicles the lives and adventures of four youths belonging to various races and cultures. There's Damien, the orphan who gets adopted by Lor elves, Ashlyn, the mage who possesses empathic and prophetic powers, Naelen, the witty, sassy swordsman, and his sister, Lila, who...
So I've hit a bit off a roadblock on how to write out someone cancelling a spell, be it their own or someone else's. I've written 'she canceled the spell, feeling the heat dissipate from her hands', but i'd like to try and write it in other way's without using the word cancel. I couldn't really...
So, I've been thinking: how do magic users organize themselves or how are they organized by others?
In a setting where using magic (by whatever definition of magic you want to use) is a skill to learn or an ability to use, would it then be necessary for magic users to organize themselves in...
This concept is based off of an scp foundation wiki monster. SCP-231 - SCP Foundation
An ancient deity called the scarlet king exists across several dimensions, but is prevented from entering our world due to a magical barrier. A cult formed in his name with the purpose of bringing him into the...
This is a draft of A.M. Krupskaya's novel ESÛNE, and Those Who Call Her Home.
Beyond the darkest voids betwixt our known stars, another blue orb pirouettes around a proud star. Here, this planet is called Esûne. Many creatures call her home: Gnomes, Elves, Dwarves, Humans, as well an endless...
Personally, I think limitations they're essential to building a quality magic system (I wrote an entire blog post on the topic, for crying out loud), but I wanted to hear some other thoughts on the matter.
Does anyone disagree? How come?
I legitimately would like to hear some other stances on...
Hey! In my current novel, it does have a magic system, although I'm having some trouble making it seem real. Any tips or basic guidelines to make it seem as if it's part of the world?
I've seen a few posts on magic rules, and things to follow. Although, any advice is helpful! :happy:
Basic...
This is my first forum post so please forgive me if this is all over the place.
I’ve created a magic system based around the 3 types of learning (VAK -Visual, Auditory, Kinesthetic, Learning). For those who don’t know about VAK Learning, it’s a theory saying we are natural learner in one of...
In my story, everyone has different levels of magic of what they can use (like some people just being really lucky all the time, they unconsciously use magic). Some people can direct magic (making them witches) and almost everyone can connect with magic at certain magic spots in the world. WHAT...
We all have those small guilty pleasures. What are some magic system cliches you can't get enough of?
Me personally, I love any kind of magic that results in disturbing physical modifications or body horror. Don't get me wrong, I'm glad that stuff doesn't exist, but I love seeing it in books...
One of the major aspects of one of my writing projects is its criminal justice system, and while I have a vague idea of the governing laws of magic as set forth by the governing body of this city I am having trouble defining them. The setting is a Dark Fantasy medieval city on the verge of...
Hi, new here and also attempting to iron out some details for my first novella/novel. So some quick context of my initial idea, although have got many details to finish/sort out: so there are magic users (either different species altogether or humans who have somehow gained magic, either by...
This system has light and dark magic, with dark magic accessible to anyone, and light magic only to fairybloods. Magic is connected with a kind of physic force, electromagnetic fields, and certain individuals (i guess with more fairy blood) are more powerful. Objects like crystals and wands help...
I love magic systems so much I have a blog dedicated to building them. I always like knowing people's struggles so I can make my content more relevant and helpful.
So. What is hardest for you when it comes to building your magic systems?
Hello everyone!
I'm writing my first fantasy story and wanted to get some advice. Ever since I started, I've been nagged by the problems associated with writing a story that has identical technologies as earth, but on a planet that is not at all earth. My frustration is also compounded, I...
I'm planning a Zodiac themed story. Each of the Signs will have a legendary Magic Item that goes with it. Not all of the Signs are chosen yet, still working on some flex spots / Place Holders.
A. No Weapons or Armor. Want fill all 12 spots with more unusual choices.
B. No Animal or People...
Evening all!
I'm currently writing up the "rules" of magic for my world. Thus far, there are five categories. I've essentially written a thesis on the subject.
However, I have hit a small snag. Can someone provide their opinions on the difference between glamour and shape-shifting for me? Is...
Worldbuilding Magazine presents our final issue of 2018: the Magic issue! We’ve packed this one with over 60 pages of content, finally tackling a subject near to so many of us. You can expect to find…
An artist feature with illustrator Anna Hannon.
2 interviews, featuring Author Ellis Knox and...
In my current book, I've created my own version of a werewolf. They transform into decidedly different types of creatures, and I've invented my own abilities and limitations for them; so they're werewolves except that everything is changed a little, if that makes sense.
The one change I can't...