Gumber- year 462 13 September In the morning, Damien woke up to the smell of freshly cooked food. He smelled fatty meats and hot biscuits. After...
12 September “Goodbye, Annael,” Ashlyn waved her mentor farewell. “I’ll see you in a few months.” Beside her, Damien was pacing in step as they...
“Absolutely not,” Annael said upon hearing Ashlyn’s preposterous idea. “We are not going to take him back with us to the Academy.” She and Ashlyn...
The Ruins of Githal- year 464 27 August Dust and brick. All around, destruction as far as the eye could see. Three weeks ago, Githal had been a...
Gumber- the year 451 2 April A baby’s cry rang about the glistening trees. The sky was alight with the dawn breaking through the patches in the...
When you read the phrase “dragon magic” what comes to mind? I’m working on a piece that deliberately caters to old tropes of fantasy and trying...
The Tales from Lorianthil series chronicles the stories and adventures of four meaty characters: Amilié, Ashlyn, Damien, and Naelen. Amilié is a...
So I've hit a bit off a roadblock on how to write out someone cancelling a spell, be it their own or someone else's. I've written 'she canceled...
So, I've been thinking: how do magic users organize themselves or how are they organized by others? In a setting where using magic (by whatever...
This concept is based off of an scp foundation wiki monster. SCP-231 - SCP Foundation An ancient deity called the scarlet king exists across...
This is a draft of A.M. Krupskaya's novel ESÛNE, and Those Who Call Her Home. Beyond the darkest voids betwixt our known stars, another blue orb...
Personally, I think limitations they're essential to building a quality magic system (I wrote an entire blog post on the topic, for crying out...
Hey! In my current novel, it does have a magic system, although I'm having some trouble making it seem real. Any tips or basic guidelines to make...
This is my first forum post so please forgive me if this is all over the place. I’ve created a magic system based around the 3 types of learning...
In my story, everyone has different levels of magic of what they can use (like some people just being really lucky all the time, they...
We all have those small guilty pleasures. What are some magic system cliches you can't get enough of? Me personally, I love any kind of magic...
One of the major aspects of one of my writing projects is its criminal justice system, and while I have a vague idea of the governing laws of...
Hi, new here and also attempting to iron out some details for my first novella/novel. So some quick context of my initial idea, although have got...
In the end duty won out. Tegwin blew her dark curls out of her face, huffing as she picked out a white dress from her wardrobe. It wasn’t the...
This system has light and dark magic, with dark magic accessible to anyone, and light magic only to fairybloods. Magic is connected with a kind of...
