BWFoster78
Myth Weaver
Nothing makes a book seem more real that commissioning the cover art. Any and all comments welcome.
Pitch:
Zack Zurick loves superheroes. Lives them. Knows everything about them. If he could only become one of them, maybe the fame and money and power would make Hayli see him as something other than a friend.
Hey, it’s possible he could be chosen to join their ranks. After all, he does have an alliterative name and is a classic underdog.
When he becomes Repulsor, his ability to repel all forms of energy make him the most powerful superhero ever. Unfortunately, it also makes it painful for Hayli to even look at him. Talk about a kick in the gut. And the whole saving-the-world thing turns out to be harder than he thought, too. The villains have teamed up, and the good guys have a traitor in their midst. Zack must figure out who’s betraying them and defeat the forces of evil–all while not getting killed.
Right. Why not just go ahead and win the girl while he’s at it?
Maybe he could, if she weren’t dating The Captain–the most popular and handsome superhero of them all. And if only Zack weren’t … Repulsive.
Cover:
Any comments/feedback is welcome, but I also have some specific questions -
1. My wife really hated the red eyes because they make him look evil. I'm thinking I can incorporate that more into the story. "All the other superheroes look like heroes. Why did I have to look demonic?" Thoughts?
2. Should I come up with some kind of logo to put on his chest to make him look more like a hero or leave it as it is? If I do a logo, I was thinking of something like a lightning bolt bouncing off a shield.
3. My original concept was to have the star around Repulsor, but I think it looks better without. Agree?
Thanks!
Brian
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Pitch:
Zack Zurick loves superheroes. Lives them. Knows everything about them. If he could only become one of them, maybe the fame and money and power would make Hayli see him as something other than a friend.
Hey, it’s possible he could be chosen to join their ranks. After all, he does have an alliterative name and is a classic underdog.
When he becomes Repulsor, his ability to repel all forms of energy make him the most powerful superhero ever. Unfortunately, it also makes it painful for Hayli to even look at him. Talk about a kick in the gut. And the whole saving-the-world thing turns out to be harder than he thought, too. The villains have teamed up, and the good guys have a traitor in their midst. Zack must figure out who’s betraying them and defeat the forces of evil–all while not getting killed.
Right. Why not just go ahead and win the girl while he’s at it?
Maybe he could, if she weren’t dating The Captain–the most popular and handsome superhero of them all. And if only Zack weren’t … Repulsive.
Cover:
Any comments/feedback is welcome, but I also have some specific questions -
1. My wife really hated the red eyes because they make him look evil. I'm thinking I can incorporate that more into the story. "All the other superheroes look like heroes. Why did I have to look demonic?" Thoughts?
2. Should I come up with some kind of logo to put on his chest to make him look more like a hero or leave it as it is? If I do a logo, I was thinking of something like a lightning bolt bouncing off a shield.
3. My original concept was to have the star around Repulsor, but I think it looks better without. Agree?
Thanks!
Brian
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