Giovanni Freitas
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Hey,
Some people here inspired me saying I should not say that I’m not good at something before I’ve tried it. So I’m creatig my own magical world, which I would love to turn into a comic one day. It's still just a sketch but I would like you to give me your opinions for what I have so far.
Here it goes:
The Story is set on fictional terrestrial blue planet called Earth, which includes various Kingdoms (countries).
Countries operate as separate political entities and are all monarchies, ruled by a King who stand as a ruler for the entire country. The countries maintain balance between themselves through nothing but power. Treaties are periodically signed but they are generally not worth much more than the paper they are written on.
The first country I created and that will be the main country is called Pryrus.
Pryrus Kingdom is a country established in the early 9th century. Pryrus is a large island, the largest island in the world, it’s size is comparable to a small country, with several smaller islands surrounding it. It is surrounded by a tall rock wall called the Ocean’s mountain. It’s flag is green laurel wreath with a sixteen pointed yellow stars that represent the sun.
Now let’s talk about magic.
Magic is the transformation of Ch'i into other substances. Magic is used all throughout the world. Ch'i causes all of the world’s narutal occurrences by using the energy it produces. Magic can do various things by giving ceremonial orders to the Ch'i at will. One can cause anything if they give the right orders to the Ch'i. As it expels or combines it causes several phenomena. By using this energy and ceremonial commands certain people can use Ch'i in order to reproduce these natural occurrences, they are called Magicians. The strength you have in using Magic is decided by the quantity of energy you are able to extract from the Ch'i.
There are countless types of Ch'i, and therefore countless types of magic. Yet, Magicians divided it into eight basic types, as well as many sub-types:
Composite Magic
Composite magic is a type of Magic that is produced from using two types of magic simultaneously.
Aberrant Magic
Aberrant magic is a type of Magic that is produced from using three or more types of magic simultaneously.
Extreme Magic
Extreme magic is a powerful use of a certain type of Magic. It requires more Ch'i than regular Magic and is highly destructive.
Djinn
Djinn are the eight titanic living forms of the eight types of Magic created by Solomon.
The Djinn in order of the eight magic pentagram:
History of the Djinn
Long before the founding of the Kingdoms, Solomon, the founding father of the magic, created eight entities, each one related to one of the magic type he had created, they were know as Djinn. Solomon named them and explained them the reason why he created them. They were supposed to teach humans the use of magic and protect them. Solomon and his followers built eight temples in different parts of the world where the entities could live and the worshiped. But the divinities started to understand the true nature of humans. After they learned magic, they started wars between themselves which made the Djinn angry against mankind. They started to destroy everything they could. What was supposed to bring peace and harmony, brought nothing but chaos and destruction. Solomon, old and weak, sealed each one of them in a golden lamp and placed each one of them in their respective sanctuary.
That’s all I have until now. What do you think?
Some people here inspired me saying I should not say that I’m not good at something before I’ve tried it. So I’m creatig my own magical world, which I would love to turn into a comic one day. It's still just a sketch but I would like you to give me your opinions for what I have so far.
Here it goes:
The Story is set on fictional terrestrial blue planet called Earth, which includes various Kingdoms (countries).
Countries operate as separate political entities and are all monarchies, ruled by a King who stand as a ruler for the entire country. The countries maintain balance between themselves through nothing but power. Treaties are periodically signed but they are generally not worth much more than the paper they are written on.
The first country I created and that will be the main country is called Pryrus.
Pryrus Kingdom is a country established in the early 9th century. Pryrus is a large island, the largest island in the world, it’s size is comparable to a small country, with several smaller islands surrounding it. It is surrounded by a tall rock wall called the Ocean’s mountain. It’s flag is green laurel wreath with a sixteen pointed yellow stars that represent the sun.
Now let’s talk about magic.
Magic is the transformation of Ch'i into other substances. Magic is used all throughout the world. Ch'i causes all of the world’s narutal occurrences by using the energy it produces. Magic can do various things by giving ceremonial orders to the Ch'i at will. One can cause anything if they give the right orders to the Ch'i. As it expels or combines it causes several phenomena. By using this energy and ceremonial commands certain people can use Ch'i in order to reproduce these natural occurrences, they are called Magicians. The strength you have in using Magic is decided by the quantity of energy you are able to extract from the Ch'i.
There are countless types of Ch'i, and therefore countless types of magic. Yet, Magicians divided it into eight basic types, as well as many sub-types:
- Heat magic
- Water magic
- Curse magic
- Lightning magic
- Wind magic
- Earth magic
- Strength magic
- Healing magic
Composite Magic
Composite magic is a type of Magic that is produced from using two types of magic simultaneously.
Aberrant Magic
Aberrant magic is a type of Magic that is produced from using three or more types of magic simultaneously.
Extreme Magic
Extreme magic is a powerful use of a certain type of Magic. It requires more Ch'i than regular Magic and is highly destructive.
Djinn
Djinn are the eight titanic living forms of the eight types of Magic created by Solomon.
The Djinn in order of the eight magic pentagram:
- Amon, the fire Djinn - Amon resembles a fire breathing dragon with fur.
- Vinea, the water Djinn - Vinea has the appearance of a snake-like seahorse.
- Astaroth, the cursed Djinn - Astaroth is a enormous snake.
- Baal, the lightning Djinn - Baal has the appearance of a bat with dragonic scales.
- Paimon, the wind Djinn - Paimon resembles a mystic white owl.
- Zagan, the earth Djinn - Zagan has the appearance of a monster-like baboon.
- Glasya-Labolas, the strength magic - Glasya-Labolas resembles a fox with crocodilian scales as skin.
- Phenex, the healing Djinn - Phenex has a bird-like appearance.
History of the Djinn
Long before the founding of the Kingdoms, Solomon, the founding father of the magic, created eight entities, each one related to one of the magic type he had created, they were know as Djinn. Solomon named them and explained them the reason why he created them. They were supposed to teach humans the use of magic and protect them. Solomon and his followers built eight temples in different parts of the world where the entities could live and the worshiped. But the divinities started to understand the true nature of humans. After they learned magic, they started wars between themselves which made the Djinn angry against mankind. They started to destroy everything they could. What was supposed to bring peace and harmony, brought nothing but chaos and destruction. Solomon, old and weak, sealed each one of them in a golden lamp and placed each one of them in their respective sanctuary.
That’s all I have until now. What do you think?