Twook00
Sage
I have a scene that's pretty bland. It's not far into the story, so I worry that a reader will get to it and stop reading. The scene itself is crucial (or so I think), so my initial thought was to cut it down as much as possible and get it over with quickly.
Now, I'm thinking I can make the scene more interesting, but this would require adding to it (like 4 or 5 paragraphs) which makes it, and my story, longer.
Anyone have thoughts on this?
Now, I'm thinking I can make the scene more interesting, but this would require adding to it (like 4 or 5 paragraphs) which makes it, and my story, longer.
Anyone have thoughts on this?