From an artistic standpoint, there is a LOT of contrast between the white on the person's skin and the black cover. First thing that drew my attention, in fact, was the light skin between the eyes. Maybe if you faded the skin into the black cover (so that it looked a little more like two eyes coming out from the cover background rather than two eyes coming out from a person that was put on the background), that would work. I would consider moving the "by" down a little bit (or the name up), as "by Pat Jackson" is all one grouping.
Otherwise, I like it ^_^