Queshire
Istar
Well relationships take time & effort to maintain and between trying to maintain 50 at once along with all the other matters which must surely consume her attention it winds up as rather dubious that the situation could continue.
By the way, this medieval romance fantasy novel of mine is supposed to be mature. It isn't innocent. I want the story of this medieval romance fantasy novel of mine to be full of genocidal war, brutal violence, rape, and sex scenes.
This is why the warrior princess protagonist is extremely sexual to the point that she loves having sex with all of her 50 knights.
There are even times when she orders multiple members of her 50 knights to have sex with her at the same time. An example of this is when she orders 5 of her 50 knights to all have sex with her at the same time. You're looking for a flaw in the warrior princess protagonist's character? Well this is one of her flaws. Yes, she isn't perfect.
I am not really sure how to answer all this, cause you want help developing your world, but we have quickly moved to the stuff that would make me dubious of all of it. Which would you prefer the focus was on?
You said this would be a Romance.
Now...imagine you are number 50.
"Oh, knight 50," said the princess, "you are so special to me. Please come to my chamber and lets make love."
"You think I am special?" says knight 50. "I mean, you literally decided to sleep with everyone else before you picked me. Heck, you slept with Sir Roderick six times already."
"Oh, Roderick, he is a beast -- Raowr.... Yes, but my love is true. I love you all. And you are so sweet."
"Princess, I could never doubt you, this night will be the most special."
"Great, be up around 10, wear this, and I like hair pulling, dont be a wuss like 45, 42, 39, 38, 31, 29, 25, 18, 16, and 12. And it might be best if you could growl like a lion at times."
"Wow, the fantasy I always wanted. I would not miss it."
"Sweet, love you. You are my most super special."
"Ahh....I bet you say that to all the knights."
"Well, actually I do."
Really, sign me up for that. I dont mind being number 50. I am sure it will be like losing her virginity all over again.
While I am a firm believer that anything can make a story, even this. I think this is lacking a good understanding of human motivation.
The types of men who become the best warriors of the land, dont stand in line for someone else and wait their turn. --just sayin.
So how does that complicate her life? Where does it punish her?
You described her as brave and mature and brutal towards her enemies. But why is that? What events transpired in her life that made her who she is?
No, that was a specific question. How does her sleeping around complicate her life? How does it punish her?
Her parents and all of her relatives brutally died at the hands of wicked humans.
Her father was skinned alive after being captured in the middle of a battle by forces of foreign imperialist armies.
Her mother was abducted and raped 10 times by assassins of a powerful family(This family is from the warrior princess protagonist's country.) The assassins and the powerful family they work for then fed the warrior princess protagonist's mother alive to brutal demons that eat humans.
What are the nations an places that surround her, and what do they want?
Alright, so vengeance is part of her character. Sorrow and hatred are powerful emotions so you might have something interesting going on if you develop it further. On a different note, while I understand that this is your novel and you're free to write it however you wish, don't you think that little lore bit clashes with the romance theme? Like if you're aiming to have a romantic novel with sexual themes, extreme cases of trauma like that might be distracting to the reader, not to mention, a very serious topic.
Is Alicia from Kara Jalu?